Are you sharing the pain of your characters now, don't make up anything. As I've talked about before in this course, the best stories are simply real experience you have with real people. But don't hold back on the pains. You'll see. Later on when I share it with you more of my stories I talked about the pain of just fear being shot. When a talk shows pulls a gun on me.

I talked about the nervousness of giving my very first speech in life. Don't forget to tell people the pain that certainly you feel, but also that the other characters in your stories are feeling