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SUMMARY:Excellent Essay - Task A
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An introduction is concise and the contention is very clear. Your ideas are great, and your paragraphs are complex and meaningful. I love how you have elevated generic topics. For example, elevating the fact that the media is inaccurate to the human nature within us all to yearn for sensational topics and events, so the media is just playing into this human desire. Your piece flows well and maintains depth whilst being concise.
This is one of the best (if not the best) pieces you have written. It is complex, clear and still concise. You have steered clear of genericity despite media being a fairly familiar topic to write about. I am really impressed, well done.

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